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Gorilla

piss stream aimtrying to spatter offwhat ought to berough padded clean your grizzly silver backwhen you torso twistinto the mirrorthat will never replymost beautiful dear knuckle draggin’big head rattling little princess peaeven the m...

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Archaic Words?

So, I’ve just been noted (within my work) that I use a lot of archaic words like: herein, forthwith, afore/aforementioned, betwix. And that these are not correct and that I should stop using them So, I’ve got a fairly simple que...

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How can I make this work?

I have been writing a new adventure in one of my series as of late, and have been running into a few issues connectingthis installment to the timeline/continuity. Said series, entitled, ‘Urban Sentinel’, is about a vigilante tha...

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Toying with a new theory about Mars.

Ever since I learned Mars was red because of Iron Oxide a.k.a Rust, has made me want humanity to stay clear of this planet.I picture a mass of iron filings that has rusted, and I can’t imagine a worse place to be. Last week… It ...

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Anti-depressants

Every person is different in terms of how they’ll react to different medications. And every person gets their creativity from different places. Negative emotion is just one kind of fuel, and it doesn’t burn clean. I’m on C...

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My The Holy Bible, Screen Play

To me, the Pentateuch or Torah (first five chapters of the Old Testament) reads more like an account of aliens visiting Earth from the POV of a primitive people. Suggested evidence of time travel or the ability to see into the future (e.g. ...

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Finding ideas, creating story lines, developing plots, etc.

I’ve noticed that some folks seem to have trouble coming up with things to write about, or developing their story ideas. Now maybe I just have too much imagination, but I see story ideas, plots, and the makings of good characters all ...

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Starting a New Line Inside a Sentence

Is it grammatically correct to occasionally start a new line in the middle of a sentence for emphasis? If I remember correctly, I saw this in one book I was reading and I really liked it. I have it in two places within 15,000+ words my WIP,...

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Lotus Americanus

We navigate this verdant grid;you and I, beneath fading contrails, over the brokenbones of the indigenous. Above the hum of the Americanhighway, we barely hear a mother’s songor the cries of hungry child. (and the people sing…) God ...

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How do you revise your work?

I tend to write a couple of chapters, then go back and check grammar and spelling, as well as looking for things that need to be re-worded or otherwise altered/replaced/removed. Since I’ve already done an enormous amount of plotting, ...

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