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How to get your reader connected with your MC?

I had a professional editor; beta reader review my first three chapters. She gave me her input, besides working on grammar. She just mentioned having action starting off middle of the story is a trope, doesn’t really work. Mainly beca...

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Difficult Romantic, HELP ME!!!

Hi, so my my current story WinterBlossoms has a big focus on a romantic relationship. This is a big deal for me, as I don’t often write romance. I don’t really know how to make my to MC fall in love, especially with the circumst...

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Sherman Tank Myths that keep popping up

Its a given that if you read WW2 Fiction and go to WW2 boards, someone will mouth off the following myths: The Sherman was nicknamed a Ronson because its gasoline tank kept blowing up: This is a myth, the majority of Shermans that caught fi...

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Wrinkles

Kim looked in the mirror and thought, Is that a wrinkle? I’m too young for a wrinkle. She frowned and thought, Doing this might cause wrinkles. “Oh well, I don’t mind getting a wrinkle as long as I had an experience to get it.” She ...

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asap

Oh, I meant when someone on their side says it to us? I know it all depends. It’s not something a lot of people in publishing have said to me so I was just wondering what it had come to mean in other’s experiences. I guess when ...

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My Male Medic’s Relationship with my Antiheroine

Ok…so I am trying to feel things out for the relationship between my antiheroine and what I would call her best friend/comrade/ally who serves as a male medic. I want to collect some thoughts from you to see if I’m going along a...

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A “clone” problem

Something to consider, maybe stop starting off saying: My story is just like series X, how can I make sure it is not identical. Instead, my story idea A (excerpt e.g. included say 500 words), what are your impressions? Basic critique, given...

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Brain Trust

So, I’m starting classes on Thursday (hurray ), and one of my classes is focused on YA literature. I got an email today from the instructors with a pretty robust list of books and we must choose two from the list to take on for whatev...

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Questions about creating a Spirit World

ITBA01 said: ↑ …how the Astral World (or Spirit World) works.. …world of the mind… …everything in my book has a soul (or consciousness) to some extent… …The problems I’ve run into is how to have c...

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Camera shot in film script

Hello! This is my very first post on this forum. I am writing my first script for a short film and I tried Google my question but couldn’t find any answer so I thought to ask my other fellow expert writers to help me out in this parti...

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