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Omniscient or multiple third-person limited?

This may be largely semantics. I recently read a book where I view the author as having employed multiple third limited viewpoint characters. Maybe someone else would view it as omniscient–there is no chapter break, section break, or ...

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Can fantasy into sci-fi?!

Hey good people! So… I’ve this fictional world that I’ve been constructing in my mind for the past seven or so years. I don’t believe that I’m ever going to complete any story set in this world, but that in and of itself is an...

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On trying to get your first book published…

No, I’m not done yet with my first novel. I’ve written about 75% of the manuscript, but after reading some articles/blog posts on the internet, I have some questions. 1) Is it really a bad thing to try to get your first written ...

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The Crown

Do not dare to enter hereFor I have died again;—Do not awaken my lovers,We are still playing pretend, I slack and loll by this.. The winding of the times,— Those bells and how they charm And blowing west the lights aroun...

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The Soggy Soggy

’Twas the night before Xmas—And down on the ground,A little meddlesome spinach leaf!A wriggle up to the spine— A cutest, soggy little morsel of joy;A soggy, soggy, soggy, soggy, Soggy, soggy, soggy, soggy, Soggy, soggy, soggy, soggy, ...

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The Three O’clock Fugue

Three o’clock in the afternoon is always a strained part of the work day and today was turning out to be proof of that reality. In his position of Regional Services Administrator Jon was sure that little good arrived at that hour and that...

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Corbyn’s Progress Journal

Mmmn. You’ve tried to help me so I will try to do in kind. There’s a very good chance you’ll hate me for it. But that’s OK. I’m a native Indian by ancestry. Iroquois. Canadian. Of the Mohawks. One of six tribes...

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Proceedure

Sitting waiting I stare into the oblivion of my imaginationSeeing the end is easier than facing the rough road to it. Time battles with itself over too quick and painfully slow.The medical moments add to the summation of outcome. The surgeo...

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Changing Scenery

lonelystar said: ↑ How does the character get to the new location? Why do they move to a new location? Is a one or two line like this not enough –the bus trip to the park took longer than I hoped because the bus stopped at every sto...

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Query Letter for Urban Fantasy

Alright, so, this is going to be a long post. I was curious, so I went to check the “other forum” where you posted this query letter. Ding ding ding, it’s exactly what I expected… you posted it in Query Letter Hell o...

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